From 495177bd9b8554eadbc6f911b03348516a8e6b73 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sun Knudsen <hello@sunknudsen.com>
Date: Fri, 5 Mar 2021 10:33:51 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Polished guide

---
 how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/README.md  |   4 +---
 .../qr-backup.sh                                |   1 +
 .../qr-backup.sh.sig                            | Bin 566 -> 566 bytes
 3 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/README.md b/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/README.md
index 8790ef0..7c8c3c9 100644
--- a/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/README.md
+++ b/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/README.md
@@ -28,8 +28,6 @@ Listed: true
 
 Replace `10.0.1.248` with IP of Raspberry Pi.
 
-When asked for passphrase, enter passphrase from [step 1](#step-1-create-ssh-key-pair-on-computer).
-
 ```shell
 ssh pi@10.0.1.248 -i ~/.ssh/pi
 ```
@@ -229,7 +227,7 @@ sudo rm -fr /boot/.fseventsd /boot/.DS_Store /boot/.Spotlight-V100
 ### Step 15: reboot
 
 ```shell
-sudo systemctl poweroff
+sudo systemctl reboot
 ```
 
 > WARNING: DO NOT CONNECT RASPBERRY PI TO NETWORK EVER AGAIN WITHOUT REINSTALLING RASPBERRY PI OS FIRST (DEVICE IS NOW "READ-ONLY" AND “COLD”).
diff --git a/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/qr-backup.sh b/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/qr-backup.sh
index 5620f33..b274202 100755
--- a/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/qr-backup.sh
+++ b/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/qr-backup.sh
@@ -90,6 +90,7 @@ function exists {
 }
 
 if [ "$bip39" = true ]; then
+  printf "%s\n" "Testing secret against BIP39 word list…"
   words=($secret)
   for word in ${words[@]}; do
     if ! exists $word; then
diff --git a/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/qr-backup.sh.sig b/how-to-create-encrypted-paper-backup/qr-backup.sh.sig
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