diff --git a/how-to-disable-ipv6-on-ios-cellular-only-and-macos-and-why-it-s-a-big-deal-for-privacy/README.md b/how-to-disable-ipv6-on-ios-cellular-only-and-macos-and-why-it-s-a-big-deal-for-privacy/README.md
index 798a22b..e3cb508 100644
--- a/how-to-disable-ipv6-on-ios-cellular-only-and-macos-and-why-it-s-a-big-deal-for-privacy/README.md
+++ b/how-to-disable-ipv6-on-ios-cellular-only-and-macos-and-why-it-s-a-big-deal-for-privacy/README.md
@@ -14,37 +14,37 @@ Publication date: 2020-07-18T10:28:23.605Z
## iOS guide
-#### Step 1 (macOS): download and open [Apple Configurator 2](https://support.apple.com/apple-configurator)
+#### Step 1 (on Mac): download and open [Apple Configurator 2](https://support.apple.com/apple-configurator)
-#### Step 2 (macOS): create new profile using cmd + n
+#### Step 2 (on Mac): create new profile using cmd + n
-#### Step 3 (macOS): configure "General" settings
+#### Step 3 (on Mac): configure "General" settings
-#### Step 4 (iOS): find your APN settings
+#### Step 4 (on iPhone): find APN settings
Open "Settings", then "Cellular", then "Cellular Data Network".
-#### Step 5 (macOS): configure "Cellular" settings
+#### Step 5 (on Mac): configure "Cellular" settings
-#### Step 6 (macOS): save provisioning profile
+#### Step 6 (on Mac): save provisioning profile
-#### Step 7 (macOS): connect iPhone to Mac
+#### Step 7 (on Mac): connect iPhone to Mac
-#### Step 8 (macOS): double-click on iPhone
+#### Step 8 (on Mac): double-click on iPhone
-#### Step 9 (macOS): click on "Profile" tab, then "Add Profiles...", select saved provisioning profile and click "Add"
+#### Step 9 (on Mac): click on "Profile" tab, then "Add Profiles...", select saved provisioning profile and click "Add"
-#### Step 10 (iOS): review profile
+#### Step 10 (on iPhone): review profile
Open "Settings", then "Profile Downloaded" and tap "Install"
@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@ networksetup -setv6off "Thunderbolt Ethernet"
## Want things back the way they were before following this guide? No problem!
-#### Step 1 (iOS): remove provisioning profile from iPhone
+#### Step 1 (on iPhone): remove provisioning profile
-Open "Settings", then "General", then "Profile", tap on your provisioning profile and tap "Remove Profile".
+Open "Settings", then "General", then "Profile", and tap provisioning profile, then "Remove Profile".
-#### Step 2 (macOS): set network interfaces to automatic
+#### Step 2 (on Mac): set network interfaces to automatic
```shell
networksetup -setv6automatic "Wi-Fi"
diff --git a/how-to-protect-mac-computers-from-cold-boot-attacks-also-known-as-an-evil-maid-attack/README.md b/how-to-protect-mac-computers-from-cold-boot-attacks-also-known-as-an-evil-maid-attack/README.md
index d3a9cb6..0661c2d 100644
--- a/how-to-protect-mac-computers-from-cold-boot-attacks-also-known-as-an-evil-maid-attack/README.md
+++ b/how-to-protect-mac-computers-from-cold-boot-attacks-also-known-as-an-evil-maid-attack/README.md
@@ -16,13 +16,13 @@ Publication date: 2020-06-05T00:00:00.000Z
sudo pmset -a destroyfvkeyonstandby 1 hibernatemode 25 standbydelaylow 0 standbydelayhigh 0
```
-`destroyfvkeyonstandby 1` tells macOS to destroy your password (override it with random data) when your computer goes to standby mode.
+`destroyfvkeyonstandby 1` tells macOS to destroy password (override it with random data) when computer goes to standby mode.
`hibernatemode 25` tells macOS to store the content of the RAM to the hard drive (which is encrypted using FileVault) and power off the RAM (which clears its data).
-`standbydelaylow 0` tells macOS to enable standby mode immediately when your battery is low and you put your computer to sleep.
+`standbydelaylow 0` tells macOS to enable standby mode immediately when battery is low and computer is put to sleep.
-`standbydelayhigh 0` tells macOS to enable standby mode immediately when your battery is high and you put your computer to sleep.
+`standbydelayhigh 0` tells macOS to enable standby mode immediately when battery is high and computer is put to sleep.
See `man pmset` for more information.